Rough cut feedback

I showed lots of members of my family our rough cut music video and they gave me some response as to what's good about it and what could be better. The positives were that the first part of the video was visually very capturing, because a lot is going on in the park which is fun and relates to the music, the way we edited it to the music on the bunnies etc and having the film match what the song is talking about. Advice to make the music video better: maybe should have made it look like it was 5 years in time, so our video matched to songs title, make the end less boring by adding more footage instead of Aykut singing. Make the beginning when we all swap places playing the ukulele more accurate.