Rough cut feedback

We have received feedback from our teacher on our rough cut. The feedback she gave was that we did not have a variety of base tracks of the main singer singing. She suggested that we film some more singing from different locations and angles. She also thought that the one match cut used in the video did not fit since our song suits jump cuts better. The other suggestion was that we add more scenes of having fun etc to fill up the section where it is mostly lip syncing. She also suggested having more scenes with the ducks and she suggested that they could be used as the cover for our digipak. We will take this feedback and improve our video.